Read once quickly, then remember and reproduce

[Exkakx]

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Last Sunday, floating around vivid blues and florescent yellows, was the bald spot on my father's bald head.

[Jplus]

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Last Sunday, floating around many strange vivid yellow spots, was the bald spot of my dad's shiny bald head.

[Adam H]

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Last Sunday, floating around many vivid yellow spots, was the shiny bald spot on the back of my dad's head.

Whoops I didn't realize there's only 2 posts between this one and my last one.

[Alaska Girl]

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Last Sunday, floating vividly around many sickly yellow spots, was the small bald spot on my dad's head.

[Oflick]

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For last Saturday, floating sickly around the yellow spots of the sky, was my Dad's bald head.

Bumping is always fun.

[Jplus]

Oh yes.

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For last Saturday, floating around the round bald spot on my dad's bright yellow head, was a shining face.

[tastelikecoke]

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From yesterday, floating around at the bald head of my old father, was a shiny old bald face.

I definitely did it wrong.

[orangedragonfire]

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From yesterday, floating around the head of my old, bald father, was a shiny old bald face.

[Oflick]

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Yesterday morning, floating around the bald head of my old father, was a shiny other blue head.

[skellious]

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yesterday morning, floating around the bald head of my father, was a blue goldfish bowl.

[Jplus]

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Yesterday in the morning, floating around the bald head of my father, was a blue goldfish bowl with a message engraved in the glass.

[BombSite_A]

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Yesterday floating, around the bald head of my father, was a blue goldfish bowl, something was engraved in it.

[orangedragonfire]

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Yesterday floating, around the bald head of my father, was a blue goldfishbowl with something golden engraved in it.

[Kyreles]

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Yesterday floating, around the bald head of my father, was a goldfish bowl with somthing golden floating in it.

[Snark]

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Yesterday while floating, along with the golden head of my father, I held a feather in my hand.

[Jplus]

Hehe.

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Yesterday while floating, along with the golden head of my father against my shoulder, I felt a feather in my hand.

[patzer]

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Yesterday, when floating with my father's golden head, I felt a feather in my hand.

[Kyreles]

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Yesterday, when floating along with my father's golden head, I felt a feather in my hand.

[patzer]

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Yesterday, when floating along with my father's golden feather, I held a head in my hand.

[Adam H]

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Sometime before noon yesterday, when floating along with my father's golden feather, I felt a head in my hand.

It has to be at least 18 words.

[patzer]

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Sometime before noon yesterday, while floating with my father's golden feather, I felt a head.

[matt96]

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some time before noon yesterday, while floating with my father's golden feather, I felt a head.

[patzer]

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sometimes before noon, when floating with my father's golden feather, I feel a head. The head belongs to the corpse of a mammoth.

(added more words to take it above 18 words)

[Jplus]

Friendly reminder: no punctuation allowed, except for at most two commas.

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Sometimes when floating around with my buch of feathers, I bump into a cloud which looks like the skull of a mammoth.

I'm going to add some highlights from the current evolution to the opening post, expect them within an hour.

[matt96]

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Sometimes while floating around with my bunch of feathers, I feel flaming mammoth skulls chasing me around the downtown London area.

[patzer]

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Sometimes when floating with a bunch of feathers, I feel a mammoth chasing me to the London area

(removed the full stop as it is punctuation?)

[Jplus]

At second thought, make that "interpunction". And I guess the full stop at the end is allowed too, as long as you don't insert full stops anywhere else.

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When floating with a bunch of feathers, more often than not I feel mammoths chasing me in the London area.

I was really surprised by the turn it took in just two posts, by the way.

[[username]]

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When floating with a bunch of feathers, more often than not I see mammaths floating in the London area.

[Sean Quixote]

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When floating with a bunch of feathers more often than not I saw mammoths swimming in the London river.

[Adam H]

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When floating with a bunch of feathers, more often than not I saw mammoths floating in the Boston river.

[patzer]

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When floating along with a bunch of feathers, more often than not I see mammoths in a Boston river.

[[username]]

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When floating along a feather river, more often than not I see mammoths in the Bristol area.

Apparently, this game is more fun while in a room full of talking people.

[Jplus]

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While floating about in a feather river, more often than not I see hairy mammoths in the Bristol area.

[patzer]

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When floating in a feathery river, more often than not I see mammoths in the B-string area. However, I never see elephants.

added a bit to go over 18 words...

[[username]]

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When floating in a feathery area, more often than not I see B-string elephants on the side sometimes.

[Setia]

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When floating in a feathery area, more often than not I see B-string elephants floating on the side sometimes.

[[username]]

Sentence:

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When floating in a feathery area, more often than not I see B-string elephants floating on the side sometimes.

Comment:

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Yay got one right!

[patzer]

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When floating in a feathery area, more often than not I see B-string elephants on their side sometimes.

[[username]]

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When floating in a feathery area, more often than not I see B-string elephants floating on their side sometimes.

[Jplus]

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When feathering sideways, more often than not I see elephants roll over to their B-sides, though the contrary also happens sometimes.

(LOL... "Wait. What?")