by antonvalur » Sat May 12, 2012 10:59 pm UTC
Hæ!
Hér eru nokkrar leiðréttingar (eng: what follows are a few corrections):
# á forníslensku = in Icelandic something is written "on", not "in" a language, e.g. "Textinn hér fyrir framan er á ensku"
- however, if you are referring to a class, "í" is correct, e.g. "áðan var ég í enskutíma" = "I was taking a class in English"
# Ég vil gjarnan æfa mig í að tala íslensku
- gjarnan = missing "n" at end
- æfa mig í að tala = æfa mig "í", not "á" + you understand the sentence without the pronoun "mig" but it sounds weird and unnatural to a native speaker, similar to "I took the dog out for a walk" vs. "I took dog out for walk"
- well, you are not really speaking here, so "æfa mig í íslensku" / "æfa íslenskuna mína" = practice my Icelandic (in general)
# svo ég hef þessa umræðu
- "hef" from the verb "hefja" = to start
- the "er" is not supposed to be there
- "ræsi" is a verb you would use for starting up a computer or setting off a race, doesn't really fit in that context, though the sentence is understood, similar to e.g. "turn on this discussion" or "set off this discussion" vs "begin this discussion"
- I would substitute "svo" for "þess vegna" or "því" ("therefore" while svo = "so")… but it's not strictly wrong.
# nútíma íslenska og forníslenska eru frábrugðin
- Here you need to use the nominative case for "íslenska", see http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nominative_case
- as in other cases, using "öðruvísi" is perhaps not horribly wrong.. but there is a contextual difference in meaning. Usually you use "öðruvísi" when comparing said objects to something else, e.g. "nútíma íslenska og forníslenska eru öðruvísi en sænska" = are different from Swedish while "frábrugðin" fits better when you have already mentioned the objects you are saying are different. A er öðruvísi en B …. A og B eru frábrugðin.
# Leiðréttið gjarnan mistökin mín
- Leiðrétta = infinitive form of the verb, while "leiðréttið" is present, plural, 2nd person - asking "the people out there" to correct your text … see http://is.wiktionary.org/wiki/lei%C3%B0r%C3%A9tta